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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Now
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-03-03
Reviewid: 140450Chapter: 1
I’m having trouble trying to place a time when these two would be running around Hogwarts like a couple of adolescents looking for such a private place. Their age difference is enough that they went there at different times. When Remus was working there he had quarters.

Reviewer: HelenHDate: 2006-03-02
Reviewid: 140442Chapter: 1
Awww, thanks Adele, and this is lovely, very touching. I particularly like how you handled their kiss - very sensual, and made more powerful by your understatement. And the last line really brings them together as the 'two halves of a whole' we all hope to find someday (and some of the lucky ones get). I'm glad Lupin got lucky, anyway.
Helen

Reviewer: Zia MontroseDate: 2006-02-27
Reviewid: 140339Chapter: 1
I liked this very much. Poignant and concise. Seems fitting for a fellow marauder to be able to locate a nook in the castle for this to take place in. And a small broom cupboard is aptly used for such an intimate discussion. Very Remus: “I have too many problems,” he says finally, in hardly more than a whisper. “Including one which won’t go away.” I also liked the use of the nickname Nym, although I haven't like other nicknames for Tonks. It reminded me of when Remus introduced her and threw in the statement "who prefers to be called by her surname". Perhaps this has been a point of contention?? Her from the heart lecture was very well-done.

Reviewer: ChocaholicDate: 2006-02-27
Reviewid: 140319Chapter: 1
Ooh, very nice. I love that they found such a lovely little corner to hold their talk. I'm glad she was able to talk a little bit of sense into him without beating him upside the head, which I'd really be tempted to do!

Reviewer: AmandaBDate: 2006-02-27
Reviewid: 140316Chapter: 1
The lines I really liked include:
'Remus, you're being close-minded
No, I'm being rational.'
This is so in character, and I also loved Tonks's speech about needing to be loved. Lovely, and touching.

Reviewer: Madaline FabrayDate: 2006-02-27
Reviewid: 140314Chapter: 1
Wow, that was lovely. I do hope Remus sees, in canon, something like this -- how much Tonks cares for him. He deserves someone.

Reviewer: ScribblerDate: 2006-02-27
Reviewid: 140312Chapter: 1
I love missing scene fics.
This was really nice, very in character, and it brought just the closure the hospital scene really needed for these two. Thank you so much for writing this and enriching the Remus/Tonks ship.

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