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Reviews for: Safe Harbour
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-03-06
Reviewid: 140595Chapter: 1
nice

Reviewer: MacarellaDate: 2006-03-03
Reviewid: 140455Chapter: 1
This is *so* beautiful!
Thank you for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: ScribblerDate: 2006-03-01
Reviewid: 140421Chapter: 1
Oh, that *was* sweet. I'm so addicted to this ship.

Reviewer: madame enDate: 2006-03-01
Reviewid: 140418Chapter: 1
Ah, R/T fics are always welcome reading, and this didn't disappoint. It's a lovely introspective moment, and very easy to visualize.

<<the same sun glints off the ring on your finger, my ring, and my breath catches in my throat at the tangible reminder that against all the odds, you do love me as much as I love you.>>

Wonderful line!

If I may make a brief concrit, I noticed a typo- I think you meant "reached" instead of "reach" in the last line.

Altogether a really nice fic.

Reviewer: AmandaBDate: 2006-03-01
Reviewid: 140410Chapter: 1
Tonks's vibrancy is exactly why she is so good for Remus, who acts as an anchor for her. I love the ship metaphors, since it seems so apt with this couple. I also liked the ravenous Weasley horde, and the mention of the ring. I could see Remus being romantic and giving her jewelery. I loved the last line, though I think reach should be reached, so the entire sentence is in the same tense.

Reviewer: Geena WatersDate: 2006-03-01
Reviewid: 140406Chapter: 1
That was really beautiful and it sums up Remus so well. I love Remus and Tonks together, it's so amazing.

~GW

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