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Review(s): 5
| Reviewer: Naazju | Date: 2007-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 148211 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very touching. I loved reading from Arthur's point of view, and I think you nailed parenthood on the head. Thank you for sharing. |
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| Reviewer: Yolanda | Date: 2006-03-11 |
| Reviewid: 140809 | Chapter: 1 |
I really like how you capture the feelings Arthur has as he sees Ron lying in the hospital wing. I can relate to seeing my child very sick (ruptured appendix at the age of 5) and there's nothing worse than that feeling--the waiting, touching their hair and hoping they can somehow feel your presence. You did a great job of putting me back there in that time and place.
I also liked the notion that they owe Harry a life debt. I hadn't even thought of that! |
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| Reviewer: Harmonious | Date: 2006-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 140745 | Chapter: 1 |
This is so sweet! I cried reading it.
You captured Molly and Arthur (and possibly Fleur) as completely as I would have imagined. You filled in a missing moment beautifully.
Good job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
-----Miriam |
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| Reviewer: AmandaB | Date: 2006-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 140721 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved how both Arthur and Molly reacted instantaneously, and the fact that Dumbledore doesn't even suspect that the mead is likely from Rosmerta, who is under the Imperius Curse, is quite sobering. I loved Harry's awkardness, and the fact that the potions book did help him remember what to do. The hints of R/Hr were also well done. This is a great piece. |
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