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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Winter to Spring
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-03-20
Reviewid: 141105Chapter: 1
Quite Nice

Reviewer: Fab4MumDate: 2006-03-19
Reviewid: 141074Chapter: 1
What a great combination - cute animals and yummy food! Kneazles and french toast and sausage. Creatures need healers, too, and Newt is wonderful, almost Dumbledore-like. Nice characterizations, sweet story.

Reviewer: mary ellisDate: 2006-03-17
Reviewid: 141026Chapter: 1
Nice. I've always liked Lavender. She'd make a good animal healer. She has a kind heart. And Newt Scamander is a big favorite of mine since I read 'Fantastic Creatures...'

You make the house so warm and homey, I could wish my cats' vet had such a place.

I love the PygmyPuff Expectormist, and the reference to having to hid the medicine, lest little Chudley should root it out with his exceptionlly long tongue. Also the reference to the Weasley twins. It would be like them to dabble in breeding and genetic mutations.

Reviewer: MagicdustDate: 2006-03-16
Reviewid: 140993Chapter: 1
Splendid. And of course well done. I noticed through out the piece your well-written dialoge. Everything seemed so real and a grand possiblity. However, I am sad to see the fan fic was only a one-chapter; it really was getting good.
Could you consider a sequel?
Cheers!
Another Congrats,
*Magic*

Reviewer: DweoDate: 2006-03-16
Reviewid: 140985Chapter: 1
I love this story. It was not the job I would expect Lavender would do but I think it does fit her.
I also like that you showed what the consequences of some the twins’ experiments are. I love the twins but they do things sometime that make me raise an eyebrow.

Reviewer: MyKarmaRanOverMyDogmaDate: 2006-03-16
Reviewid: 140981Chapter: 1
That was so good! And I love your bowling story, fantastic. This was so great, though, it's good to know Lavender has some other things on her mind other than snogging. ;D

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