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| Reviewer: Mcily Nochi | Date: 2006-04-04 |
| Reviewid: 141618 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love this. Sirius is so much more than anyone can see about him. I guess that's the theme of his life - no one ever quite understands him and his motivations. No wonder he formed such fast friendships with the few people who really got to know him. |
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| Reviewer: shiiki | Date: 2006-03-29 |
| Reviewid: 141446 | Chapter: 1 |
Lovely! I especially enjoyed the exploration of Sirius's feelings from another girls' point of view. It came off very insightful.
I will be eagerly awaiting the next instalment of "Student"! |
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| Reviewer: TDU | Date: 2006-03-28 |
| Reviewid: 141402 | Chapter: 1 |
I'm glad you've given Sirius someone special and not just the usual steam of meaningless girls. In canon he strikes me as someone desperate to have someone to love and though he found that with his friends I find it a bit incongruous with the womaniser Sirius that often turns up in fanfiction. You paint a nice picture of two people very comfortable with each other after five years of friendship but not quite so comfortable about the new twist in their relationship. It will be interesting to compare this with how you write James and Lily, as I am guessing (hoping) you mean to do from your Lily story.
Thank you for letting us read your story,
TDU |
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