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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: bennedetto | Date: 2006-05-06 |
| Reviewid: 142573 | Chapter: 1 |
I love this story so much.
I like, started laugh-crying when I had finished.
Your stories are all so great, and every sentence drips with emotion that will make you laugh or cry or whatever feeling it is you're going for.
Short. Sweet. Lovely.
Peace forever
bennedetto |
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| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2006-04-07 |
| Reviewid: 141747 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awww...I like this. Usually H/G stories wallow in angst, and you are definitely not the wallowing kind. This is how I like 'em: short and very sweet. |
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| Reviewer: silver_blaise | Date: 2006-04-05 |
| Reviewid: 141656 | Chapter: 1 |
| i like the way you described Harry's burden. And his innate goodness. :) nice. |
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| Reviewer: eluann | Date: 2006-04-02 |
| Reviewid: 141555 | Chapter: 1 |
| The idea's great, and I hope you continue with it, but Ginny's speech is a bit sugary for her. "... dear, sweet boy" somehow doesn't sound like the sort of thing Ginny would say. |
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| Reviewer: Pink Sunflower | Date: 2006-04-01 |
| Reviewid: 141533 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so sweet, you really got Ginny's fiery determination for a happy ending just perfect! |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2006-04-01 |
| Reviewid: 141528 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so sweet. You really hit the nail on the head for why Harry needs to complete the destiny that Voldemort chose for him. In the end, like Ginny, I believe that Harry will prevail to come home and be 'Just Harry' like he wants to be. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story. |
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| Reviewer: Tasha | Date: 2006-04-01 |
| Reviewid: 141520 | Chapter: 1 |
Great short story
I can see him just wanting to be Harry and not the boy who lived
and I can see Ginny knowing she has to let him go so that she can get him back |
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