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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2006-04-07 |
| Reviewid: 141745 | Chapter: 1 |
| Thanks for writing this. I love when the older girl says: "We are not a house. We are a family." And the speaker 'gets it' right away. Which means the Hat has chosen correctly once again. |
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| Reviewer: Te Aroha | Date: 2006-04-07 |
| Reviewid: 141733 | Chapter: 1 |
True...
I really like the new perspective you've got on this. not many people write about hufflepuff from the inside.
(sorted: Hufflepuff!) |
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| Reviewer: Gryfny | Date: 2006-04-05 |
| Reviewid: 141661 | Chapter: 1 |
Very nice story which gives us a small look into how/what the 'Puffs' think of their noble house. I do enjoy a nice well written Hufflepuff story.
It's great! |
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| Reviewer: Reesie | Date: 2006-04-04 |
| Reviewid: 141612 | Chapter: 1 |
I really loved your story! It gives a very rare POV within the House of Hufflepuff. I really liked this line: "But you will find that we make quieter heroes. We are the healers and the mothers and the comforters in this war, and all the time."
Two bits of criticism - I would have preferred the text as plain, not bolded - easier on the eyes, and I would have loved to see references to canon Hufflepuffs woven into the storyline.
Very nice. |
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