|
| Dumbledore's
Army |
|
|
|
Review(s): 3
| Reviewer: shiiki | Date: 2006-04-12 |
| Reviewid: 141860 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, the image of Umbridge turning into a large canary is too good to be true! (Unfortunately.) It strikes me that everyone would be able to trace mayhem back to Gred and Forge in the end, though.
I think it's interesting how you've portrayed Ginny as 'the most feared Weasley'. Shows what she's 'inherited' from her mother ... and it certainly goes with her fiery character! |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
| Reviewer: AmandaB | Date: 2006-04-11 |
| Reviewid: 141818 | Chapter: 1 |
| Well, the twins certainly went out with a bang, didn't they. Sorry, that was a bad joke. Anyway, I love how Ginny gives them the idea of using the explosives, and the idea of Umbridge as a canary is funny. Though I do agree that the twins would want to keep the plan secret, especially from Molly. Her Howler must have been quite scathing. A great snippet showing the twins inventiveness and cleverness. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
|
|
