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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Lord of the Snake
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: mary ellisDate: 2006-04-23
Reviewid: 142186Chapter: 1
Oh yay, another 'house' story! I loved the one for Hufflepuff--that's still my fave. But this one's very good. The tone is appropriately creepy and threatening.
Write on, oh Unhappy, and Possibly Poisonous, Leguminous Herb or (if you cap the G and add an extra 'm') Wolfish Collector of Germanic Fairytales.

Reviewer: OSUSprinksDate: 2006-04-20
Reviewid: 142092Chapter: 1
Wow. I really enjoyed your Hufflepuff story but this is a whole new level. I enjoyed it just as much, but frankly I'm pretty freaked out. I really like the things your boy knows he must change immediately to "be a source of pride." I'm looking forward to the others in your series! Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-04-16
Reviewid: 141968Chapter: 1
nice

Reviewer: EricaVeeDate: 2006-04-14
Reviewid: 141902Chapter: 1
These are fabulous! I can't wait for the others. The ending to this one is just perfect.

Reviewer: ReesieDate: 2006-04-14
Reviewid: 141901Chapter: 1
Very good, wish it was longer because I was enjoying it.

"The rest of the school has forsaken us, and so, Slytherin House turns to itself." Makes me wonder about the heterogeneity in the Slytherin House - and peer pressure. Take a child with a seed of insecurity which causes him to need attn, and the Slytherin House could completely warp that and produce arrogance and cruelty.

Very well done. Would love to see more depth and characterization.

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