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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Lesley | Date: 2006-10-31 |
| Reviewid: 146024 | Chapter: 1 |
| Eloquent and thoughtfull. Gentle and very moving. I hope to see more from this author. |
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| Reviewer: Cendrillon | Date: 2006-04-18 |
| Reviewid: 142015 | Chapter: 1 |
I liked the way you tied together the seasonal cycle with the life cycle. And I particularly enjoyed the ending. "Every year has a spring." - that was the perfect conclusion. The metaphors which tied in the season were also great details.
Nice work! |
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| Reviewer: Talimeeka | Date: 2006-04-16 |
| Reviewid: 141962 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love it! The story have great imagery. I also like how you wrote all the relationships in Tonks life. For example, Sirius taking her on his motorbike and looking over his shoulder. That's just great. Good job Amy! |
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| Reviewer: Arya | Date: 2006-04-16 |
| Reviewid: 141961 | Chapter: 1 |
| Once again, I like this fic. It's sweet, and about Tonks (always a plus). It reminds me of a song..."Everything has it's season, everything has it's time..." I forget the name, but I love that song. Also Seasons of Love, of course. :D Great fic. |
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| Reviewer: MrsMoony | Date: 2006-04-16 |
| Reviewid: 141960 | Chapter: 1 |
That was great, Amy! It's wonderful to see such a hopeful ending, especially after all the darkness in Tonks' life.
<i>Summer is when a teenage girl dances on the grass in naught but a bathing suit, completely barefoot and shivering in an odd sort of delight as a cool breeze brushes past.</i>
Beautiful imagery. :)
~Victoria |
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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2006-04-16 |
| Reviewid: 141950 | Chapter: 1 |
Amy,
What a sweet story; I love how you compare Tonks's life to the seasons and how she has spring at the end instead of the beginning. Beautiful.
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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