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Reviews for: Seasonal Cycle
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: LesleyDate: 2006-10-31
Reviewid: 146024Chapter: 1
Eloquent and thoughtfull. Gentle and very moving. I hope to see more from this author.
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Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-04-18
Reviewid: 142029Chapter: 1
Nice
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Reviewer: CendrillonDate: 2006-04-18
Reviewid: 142015Chapter: 1
I liked the way you tied together the seasonal cycle with the life cycle. And I particularly enjoyed the ending. "Every year has a spring." - that was the perfect conclusion. The metaphors which tied in the season were also great details.
Nice work!
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Reviewer: TalimeekaDate: 2006-04-16
Reviewid: 141962Chapter: 1
I love it! The story have great imagery. I also like how you wrote all the relationships in Tonks life. For example, Sirius taking her on his motorbike and looking over his shoulder. That's just great. Good job Amy!
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Reviewer: AryaDate: 2006-04-16
Reviewid: 141961Chapter: 1
Once again, I like this fic. It's sweet, and about Tonks (always a plus). It reminds me of a song..."Everything has it's season, everything has it's time..." I forget the name, but I love that song. Also Seasons of Love, of course. :D Great fic.
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Reviewer: MrsMoonyDate: 2006-04-16
Reviewid: 141960Chapter: 1
That was great, Amy! It's wonderful to see such a hopeful ending, especially after all the darkness in Tonks' life.

<i>Summer is when a teenage girl dances on the grass in naught but a bathing suit, completely barefoot and shivering in an odd sort of delight as a cool breeze brushes past.</i>

Beautiful imagery. :)

~Victoria
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Reviewer: StarseaDate: 2006-04-16
Reviewid: 141950Chapter: 1
Amy,

What a sweet story; I love how you compare Tonks's life to the seasons and how she has spring at the end instead of the beginning. Beautiful.

xxx~Starsea~xxx
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