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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: Emerika | Date: 2006-07-04 |
| Reviewid: 143953 | Chapter: 2 |
| Haha. I like this guy. Anyone who does that to Bellatrix is all right in my book! I love how you made his personality so defiant! Please write more! |
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| Reviewer: elle_wood | Date: 2006-06-19 |
| Reviewid: 143528 | Chapter: 2 |
| I must say that if the story is headed where the synopsis suggests than it's very very OOC of Bellatrix and I could never see her in that light, but I still like this story. I'm interested in the whole premise I guess and so far it is well written. It's very cute. Keep writing, I want to know what happens next. |
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| Reviewer: wanderlust26 | Date: 2006-06-16 |
| Reviewid: 143461 | Chapter: 2 |
| Wow, love your story so far. You got Bella down SO right. And the muggle guy--he's intriguing! Write more. ;) |
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| Reviewer: Amick_woods | Date: 2006-05-08 |
| Reviewid: 142669 | Chapter: 1 |
| A side of Bellatrix that I'm excited to see explored! What a cute little boy, I look forward to more! |
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| Reviewer: AmandaB | Date: 2006-04-29 |
| Reviewid: 142356 | Chapter: 1 |
This is an interesting premise, especially the idea that not everyone that is magical can afford to go to Hogwarts, though it makes sense. I loved your characterization of Bellatrix as disdainful, prideful, and willful. I especially liked:
It's the magic in my blood, fool, and the meager amount of it in yours. And don't talk to me again!
This line is a good foreshadowing of why she considers herself superior, and could go a long way to her choosing to become a Death Eater. I don't know how you are going to resolve this rather large divide between her and Jonathan, but I look forward to how you can make it believable. |
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