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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: MadHatterLovesGinny | Date: 2006-06-27 |
| Reviewid: 143775 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was a very good story. It was short, sweet, and showed that everyone has something to hide. Though I am one of the biggest Ron and Hermione shippers, I feel bad for Neville. He only really connected with his crush for, like, five minutes. Anyway, very nice story. Two thumbs up! |
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| Reviewer: Fab4Mum | Date: 2006-05-05 |
| Reviewid: 142546 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww! You gotta love Neville. I know I do! This is a very sweet vignette. Someday I hope his Gran appreciates him. I like the way you've made him awkward and brave at the same time. So -- Neville. |
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| Reviewer: dogstar | Date: 2006-05-04 |
| Reviewid: 142532 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww! Neville's name in the title drew me in and I'm glad it did. I loved how you showed Neville and Hermione as close friends and him stepping back because of Ron, even though he likes her. Neville *will* have a bright future. And the Ron and Hermione moment at the end was beautifully done. Thank you! |
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| Reviewer: Madame V. Hunter | Date: 2006-05-01 |
| Reviewid: 142430 | Chapter: 1 |
| Neville is a prince of a guy an deserves a princess--I'm always happy to see stories that show his gentle strength as this story does. |
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| Reviewer: Miss Gypsy | Date: 2006-05-01 |
| Reviewid: 142424 | Chapter: 1 |
This was wonderfully poignant and sweet. I enjoyed it very much.
Poor Neville. The end of this was so heartbreakingly sincere.
Thank you for a beautiful little story! |
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| Reviewer: Pink Sunflower | Date: 2006-04-30 |
| Reviewid: 142392 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, this is a really sweet little story. So many fics portray Neville as a bumbling, awkward boy, it's great to finally read one that shows him differently. Reading this was a really good way to spend a few minutes. :) |
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| Reviewer: Alkari | Date: 2006-04-29 |
| Reviewid: 142359 | Chapter: 1 |
"Neville sighed and moved back into the shadows he had been in previously. At least for one shining moment, he had been a knight."
That was beautiful. For once, Hermione shows she can be gentle and understanding, and doesn't adopt her OotP lecturing mode! And Neville was so utterly - well, just wonderful brave Neville. |
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