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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: Amanda | Date: 2005-07-13 |
| Reviewid: 127087 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was soo cute. I loved the whole inner voices thingy- funny. It could hav been a little longer though. Awesome job. Keep writing |
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| Reviewer: Grimy Grunhilda Grunt | Date: 2004-06-01 |
| Reviewid: 85540 | Chapter: 1 |
| well... the beginning was awesome, but in the end the knots were tied a little bit too quickly. Make them tremble a little. Gives the moment more intencity. |
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| Reviewer: Kate | Date: 2004-04-27 |
| Reviewid: 80384 | Chapter: 1 |
| lol. it was adoralbe..it reminded me of golem anad his split personalities..but in a good way. :-D |
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| Reviewer: Myster web | Date: 2003-09-29 |
| Reviewid: 54763 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved the two personalitlies of Ginny in this story! Can you maybe do one for Ron or Hermione? That would be really funny to read. |
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| Reviewer: daniela | Date: 2003-08-24 |
| Reviewid: 48475 | Chapter: 1 |
| it was okay. i liked the story. but it could have a bee na bit better written. though, over all it was a good story, it just needed a little tweeking. |
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| Reviewer: Roy C | Date: 2003-07-11 |
| Reviewid: 41412 | Chapter: 1 |
| all mbe it short..this was quite cute..although I think it could have been set up a bit more. I think the voices should have been a bit more vocal as to what Gin is thinking about Harry. |
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| Reviewer: Arlene | Date: 2002-12-08 |
| Reviewid: 11810 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ooooh!! It was so sweet!!! I loved it! I like how Ginny 'fights' with herself inside, that was cool. It is such a great story, keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2002-11-18 |
| Reviewid: 9493 | Chapter: 1 |
| OH! that was soooooo sweeeeet!!!! i like ron/hermione better, but i like ginny/harry too!!! this is the most natural one ive ever read! |
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