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Reviews for: To Choose Better
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-09-01
Reviewid: 145128Chapter: 1

Reviewer: weaselsuDate: 2006-06-22
Reviewid: 143598Chapter: 1
Harry and Ginny that doesn't have a bad sound to it not at all. I love that sentence! I loved it all:). xxoo

Reviewer: hp4-sauceDate: 2006-06-18
Reviewid: 143499Chapter: 1
I have to say I like missing moments above all else and this one was very well done. If only he really had experienced an epiphany about Ginny much earlier! As it was, the gradual realization of his changed feelings towards her seemed to come as a bit of a shock to him after the summer (on the Hogwarts Express in fact - although he didn't know it for what it was even then!). Boys! Anyway, great job.

Reviewer: NunduDate: 2006-06-10
Reviewid: 143343Chapter: 1
Very nicely done! You do 'inside Harry's head' very well. You have the tone just right for a fifteen, almost sixteen year old boy.

PS-the quote is from OotP rather than GoF.

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