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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Ninian Echo | Date: 2006-06-20 |
| Reviewid: 143538 | Chapter: 1 |
| Felina! Fantastic Job! You captured the characters wonderfully. I especially loved the speech Molly gives on living your life through the uncertainties and that love gives you something to fight for. Very moving. I hope you keep at it and your Gryffindor courage allows you to post more on Sugar Quill. Great job Felina, I'm so proud of you! |
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| Reviewer: Felix Felicis | Date: 2006-06-17 |
| Reviewid: 143485 | Chapter: 1 |
Hey, Heather, great story! The way you show Molly in her role as mother/matchmaker is very entertaining, but still close to her true character. It was fun seeing Arthur's side of things, too. I think you've got Remus pegged. He's so unemotional... or rather he hold his emotion back and always seems to look at things from a distant perspective. I love that Molly tried to break him down to where she could deal with him like a Weasley!
Please tell me there's more coming after this! I want to see them get together (and see Molly give them her 'I told you so' look. |
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| Reviewer: AmandaB | Date: 2006-06-17 |
| Reviewid: 143477 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really liked Arthur's comments about Remus being more accustomed to reason then emotion, and you really show that here. Though I do agree that he is not willing to trust that Tonks will be able to overcome all the barriers between them. But Black persistance wins out in the end. I also like how you acknowledge that any comfort during this awful war makes it better because you have something very important, worth fighting for. |
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