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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: MadHatterLovesGinnyDate: 2006-06-27
Reviewid: 143745Chapter: 1
This story was amazing! I agree with you that Ron and Hermione should admit their feelings by the biggest argument of their lives. I've read many stories(including the part of the 6th book)of that part of Ron- and Hermione's relationship, and this is the best! You should write more stories, maybe even one like this but with Harry and Ginny. You're an amazing author. Keep writing!!! :)

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-06-23
Reviewid: 143616Chapter: 1
Quite Nice.

Reviewer: Baron Von KroggDate: 2006-06-18
Reviewid: 143508Chapter: 1
A very enjoyable angry read that only our beloved
Hermione and Ron could come up with. And its also
very nice to see how Ron makes it up to Hermione
with a very nice loooooooooong kiss.Please continue
and we'll paitently await your next write.

Reviewer: Felix FelicisDate: 2006-06-17
Reviewid: 143495Chapter: 1
I'm very impressed! For a first try, this is outstanding. I think you've nailed Ron and Hermione perfectly - right in character. I agree with your thoughts - the only way they're going to admit their feelings is to have an all-out screaming match. I love how they're so insecure in their feeings, especially Ron. Who could possibly compete with Hermione?

Great story! I hope you write more.

Reviewer: EricaVeeDate: 2006-06-17
Reviewid: 143475Chapter: 1
I think that Ron went a little crazy at the end, and that the "there's something better than a book" line is a little too much like the "there's something better than a play" line from Shakespeare In Love, but it's a cute fic all the same. The part of this that I really love is the two "speeches", especially Ron's at the very beginning-- so cute!

Reviewer: MyKarmaRanOverMyDogmaDate: 2006-06-17
Reviewid: 143472Chapter: 1
Aw, that was great! I loved the last sentence! :D

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