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Reviews for: Isn't It Obvious?
Review(s): 8

Reviewer: Sana JonDate: 2005-03-23
Reviewid: 117524Chapter: 1
I just loved to read this, it made me so delighted in some particular spots! :) Are you going to write more for this one? Hope so, than Sirius and James can confront Remus and everything...

Lovely work with the character and time parallels, yes indeedy! ;) :D

Reviewer: LizDate: 2004-09-26
Reviewid: 99425Chapter: 1
Wow... I've never seen these two things compared like this. Awesome job, had me snickering. ^_^

Reviewer: Xan yDate: 2004-08-09
Reviewid: 96487Chapter: 1
its a little confusing. and is there more?

Reviewer: $~#Glowing * Toadstool#~$Date: 2004-07-02
Reviewid: 90273Chapter: 1
That was honestly a really cute story. :) Good job and keep up the good work! ;)

Reviewer: imeldaDate: 2004-07-01
Reviewid: 89830Chapter: 1
Ack!!! I love it!! I was so confused, at first, when you switched time periods, but it quickly became clear what you were doing...I hadn't even recognized the scene when you did it in MWPP's time. HOW did you think of this?? And I absolutely love how you showed the same dynamic between the two, ahem, couples (I always thought James and Ron were more similar than Harry and James, anyway).
Brava!!! Brava!!!

Reviewer: AmeDate: 2004-05-11
Reviewid: 82285Chapter: 1
Clever, comparing the relationship of Hermione and Ron with that of James and Lily. Cute story!

Reviewer: Shan_kaiyouDate: 2003-06-27
Reviewid: 38770Chapter: 1
Heh... I like how you compared your scene to a scene in Book 3, making James sound a lot like Ron. I also agree with your implied statement that Ron and Hermione should be together. Only, please don't tell me you think Harry and Ginny should be together too.

Reviewer: Hermione @ HeartDate: 2002-09-09
Reviewid: 3615Chapter: 1
Hey! I'm the first review! Isn't that sad, because this is so cute?

I never thought of Hermione being like Lily. Clever, very clever. That was great!

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