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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Jillie | Date: 2006-10-22 |
| Reviewid: 145871 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very cute in it's brevity! I like that this little fic could easily fit into anyone else's fanfiction--all of the classic elements of Marauders fics exist here. Sirius womanizes, James chases, Lily curses, and Remus sits back and relaxes, all while a little girl is interested in it all. Yeah, definitely cute. Kudos. |
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| Reviewer: dogstar | Date: 2006-07-09 |
| Reviewid: 144072 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like your characterisation of Remus: quiet, helpful, content to take a back seat to his James and Sirius. I also like the way you've drawn all the Marauders vividly, even in their absence, with ever-so-subtle details - great use of POV. More please - I'm intrigued to know if she really is more interested in his friends than Remus himself! |
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| Reviewer: Emelye | Date: 2006-07-08 |
| Reviewid: 144032 | Chapter: 1 |
*ahem* Arya.. There IS going to be another chapter, isn't there? Yes? Shortly? *stares expectantly*
I loved how you threw the weekly detention line in there, so casually. It's absolutely perfect because of course we're in Lupin's head and he's so used to these weekly detentions that they're barely worth a mention. Just another item on the mental checklist. It's brilliantly subtle humor.
*wubbles Remus* |
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| Reviewer: Rob Grey 03 | Date: 2006-07-07 |
| Reviewid: 144011 | Chapter: 1 |
Well done! I enjoyed this fun little tale. Remus as tutor - yeah, that works very well.
It's a cute little fic; I'd like to see if it goes anywhere.
Nice job!
Cheers |
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