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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: mary ellis | Date: 2007-02-02 |
| Reviewid: 147057 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is unbearably touching, Arya. I hope you're sending these one-shots out to some other sites. They would be well received, I know (even though no other site than SQ--except perhaps Checkmated--has reviewers who really comment with any degree of perceptiveness.) You really get to the heart of the story quickly, economically, and your characters always have something important to say. |
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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2006-09-15 |
| Reviewid: 145342 | Chapter: 1 |
I like this: it's very restrained, which makes the poignancy of the storyline all the more effective. The lyrics are the perfect compliment to Ginny's farewell. My only critique is that it takes a lot of people a long time to move on from the death of a loved one; a year is quite short. I can see Hermione talking about new jobs but I can't see Molly telling Ginny that she has to move on. On the other hand, I suppose it depends on how deep Ginny's grief has been. We know that she'll never forget him and that's the important thing.
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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| Reviewer: inthestars0318 | Date: 2006-09-10 |
| Reviewid: 145277 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was soo sad... but beautiful and poignant. I think you captured Ginny's character extraordinarily well; in a lot of fics about Ginny, I get the feeling that she's just a little too sensitive, or a little too insensitive, or just... not right. But this Ginny seems spot-on. Nice work. |
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| Reviewer: kleio | Date: 2006-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 144794 | Chapter: 1 |
| Though this story is short it is powerful. It drew me in immediately and has evoked painful feelings. I found myself wanting to know more about Harry's death. How did Bellatrix kill him? How have Ron and Hermoine managed to get beyond their grief? I judge a story by the level of character development and by the emotions that are raised in me after reading it. I love these characters already but I'm quite surprised at the effect this story has had on me. I think the fact that I want to go deeper into it is a testament to its power. Thank you. |
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| Reviewer: LorettaMalibu | Date: 2006-08-11 |
| Reviewid: 144749 | Chapter: 1 |
| aww that's so sad but sweet at the same time. I love that song. I, too sang it in jazz choir :) |
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| Reviewer: Angelina Weasley | Date: 2006-08-10 |
| Reviewid: 144722 | Chapter: 1 |
Woah. Woah, Arya. The song..went perfectly with the story you've told. This was a bit scary, actually.
Woah. Good one...
Angie |
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