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Reviews for: Piece of Cake
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: Kaity PotterDate: 2006-10-23
Reviewid: 145873Chapter: 1
I really liked the story it was pretty good!!


Reviewer: Ada KensingtonDate: 2006-09-21
Reviewid: 145443Chapter: 1
Short and sweet - and the pun was most certainly intended. A nice look at Lily and James warming up to one another, not least due to the fact that it's very well characterised.


I really want some chocolate cake now. This is all your fault, CornedBee!

Reviewer: Fab4MumDate: 2006-09-09
Reviewid: 145266Chapter: 1
This was very sweet! Oh, the story, not the cake. But the cake too, probably. Especially since you described it so wonderfully. And Lily showing that she can be a match for James' arrogance. And the sweet surprise at the end, showing that he's not holding a grudge, and he's actually doing something thoughtful. Makes me want to search the cupboard for cake mix. Good story, well done!

Reviewer: princess serenaDate: 2006-09-06
Reviewid: 145222Chapter: 1
wow! That was an amzing story! Really funny and realistic! Well done!

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-09-05
Reviewid: 145198Chapter: 1
Very cute. Nicely done.

Reviewer: YouLickBumsDate: 2006-09-04
Reviewid: 145185Chapter: 1
haha this was nice
it made me smile.
Thank You. =]

Reviewer: Madaline FabrayDate: 2006-09-04
Reviewid: 145169Chapter: 1
I think I read this elsewhere, but it was worth rereading. You balance Lily's feelings-- that love-hate- stage -- so well. James is such an imp, but you can't hate him.

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