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Reviews for: Second Thoughts
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: A_Wash1979Date: 2006-10-09
Reviewid: 145626Chapter: 1
That was awesome! I read the whole thing with a smile on my face. I really liked the fact that you chose to write it from Sirius's point-of-view. The betting pool was hilarious, and the portion about having Harry stay with him for the summer was very poignant, since we know he won't be around by then. Very entertaining!

Reviewer: AmandaBDate: 2006-09-18
Reviewid: 145384Chapter: 1
I really liked this. The image of Remus sorting the library was so in character, and seems like something I would do (which says something about me). I also liked how though Remus wanted to take things slow (be casual) that's not what Tonks had in mind. I'm glad they are together, and that Sirius is there for Remus. I especially loved the living vicariously line, because not only does it emphasize the depth of their friendship, it also displays how much Sirius relies on others for everything now. Good job.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-09-17
Reviewid: 145370Chapter: 1
Most excellent. Thanks.

Reviewer: Lorelei LynnDate: 2006-09-16
Reviewid: 145361Chapter: 1
Loved it! The interaction between Sirius and Remus was perfect - both thoughtful and funny. "The natural genetic drive to couple" - LOL.

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