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Reviews for: On the Threshold
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Hpgirl42095Date: 2006-11-05
Reviewid: 146082Chapter: 1
Truly excellent! I couldn't have imagined them young like that...

LOL

Reviewer: mary ellisDate: 2006-11-05
Reviewid: 146078Chapter: 1
Yesss! Perfect characterization, perfect setting. Love your way with words 'steamrolled', 'truly wicked', and how 'Mollywobbles' came to be.

And of course they'd elope.

Thanks muchly.

Reviewer: girlyswotDate: 2006-11-04
Reviewid: 146068Chapter: 1
So cute! I don't usually read Molly/Arthur but this was lovely.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-11-04
Reviewid: 146065Chapter: 1
very nice

Reviewer: queeniorekDate: 2006-11-04
Reviewid: 146062Chapter: 1
“Arthur?”

“Hmm?”

“Let’s elope.”

Wow. I love young!MollyandArthur stories so much, and this one just blew me away. I love the history of the Burrow and of their families. And the best part was “I – I want.... You give me the mollywobbles, Colly!” That is such a sweet explanation for her nickname! Absolutely precious. Thank you.

Reviewer: Mcily NochiDate: 2006-11-04
Reviewid: 146061Chapter: 1
This is so cute! I love how awkward Arthur is, and I can totally see Molly being the aggressor and throwing herself at him like that. Also, it makes perfect sense that when things get dangerous and uncertain, you want to cling to the things that matter to you the most and take fullest advantage of what time you have left.

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