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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Fab4Mum | Date: 2006-12-11 |
| Reviewid: 146426 | Chapter: 1 |
| This fic was a very GOOD idea! (sorry, I couldn't resist) I was trailing along all the way, thinking it was Ginny who had slipped the potion to Harry, and then - BAM! Really well done. And I found it very satisfying to think that Harry had ended it with Ginny for a reason other than being "noble." Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Potioncat | Date: 2006-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 146349 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh you wicked, wicked person! The entire story I was trying to figure out how Ginny was slipping Harry the potion!!! And how he was strong enough to fight it off.
Nice surprise! |
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| Reviewer: highwayman | Date: 2006-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 146343 | Chapter: 1 |
Even though you may not think it, the way you subtly twist it could be reason enough that this sub-plot could actually happen in Canon. I also rate as very excellent the "full-circle" method of story-telling by beginning and ending the story with Hermione's advise at both beginning and end. It's very well-executed and fit naturally within the narrative. Thank-you for a very well-written fanfic.
sincerely,
The Highwayman. |
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| Reviewer: Vicus | Date: 2006-11-29 |
| Reviewid: 146322 | Chapter: 1 |
| NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! How could you do that!! Harry using a love Potion?!?! That's SO very wrong! But original, yes I must admit that. Oh well... I didnt want the story to finish. It was sooo short. And that unexpected ending!! Congratulations, you wrote a great story. |
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