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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Thestrals
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: McGonagall's CatDate: 2006-12-29
Reviewid: 146665Chapter: 1
This was well done. Believable and in character.
(You used "casket" when you meant "tomb" at one point.)

Reviewer: ceriDate: 2006-12-16
Reviewid: 146456Chapter: 1
i liked this story - thanks

Reviewer: shimotsukiDate: 2006-12-12
Reviewid: 146440Chapter: 1
Very nice. The interactions between the characters feel right, and you deftly capture Dean's guilt for not responding to the summons from the DA.

And having Lupin become less sure that he had seen a thestral when Tonks was around -- aww, that was a nice touch.

There is one thing I did wonder about, though. Sometimes I had trouble understanding whether we were seeing the world from Dean's perspective, or from Lupin's. (But maybe this was intentional?)

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-12-12
Reviewid: 146433Chapter: 1
Well Done - thanks.

Reviewer: hp4-sauceDate: 2006-12-12
Reviewid: 146431Chapter: 1
Interesting. Enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Mcily NochiDate: 2006-12-11
Reviewid: 146427Chapter: 1
What an interesting snapshot. It really feels like tumbling into a Pensieve and witnessing a moment in time in someone else's life through your own eyes. Good job! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything else of yours since the Quiz Bowl tournament, but Seri reminded me to do so, and then lo and behold, you posted a new fic. Very nice.

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