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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2007-01-23 |
| Reviewid: 146974 | Chapter: 1 |
I'm not surprised this won a competition. Your prose is flawless, from the description of the moonlit night to Snape's tension as he waits for the sign, hoping against hope that it will not come. I had no idea what this sign was until you revealed it, yet once you had revealed it, everything made sense.
Bravo.
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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| Reviewer: LizzieAnn | Date: 2006-12-22 |
| Reviewid: 146589 | Chapter: 1 |
| I very much like this piece, it is thought provoking and remaines very true to the character and the cannon of the books. Very good job. |
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| Reviewer: Te Aroha | Date: 2006-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 146551 | Chapter: 1 |
Hi
I thought your characterisation of Snape was excellent, especially the way you put emphasis on his liking for logic and warmth - perfectly logical, reasonable, things for him to like that give his character more depth and credibility, although many authors prefer to have Snape happily freezing to death on some forsaken rock.
I also really like the description of the dark mark as slithering under his clothes - perfectly chilling. I would read this again.
T.A |
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