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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Birgit | Date: 2007-01-07 |
| Reviewid: 146779 | Chapter: 1 |
Brilliant story. I love the way you set this up, about the Englishman of whom no one was really sure what he did. I also love the entire encounter with Greyback. The moment Greyback was hit with the Killing Curse I wondered whether he was really killed, but the part of me that wants everything to go well convinced me that he was. Well, turns out he wasn't. Which makes the story even better. I really like it that Remus wasn't able to kill, not even Greyback.
I assume that Remus is now taking the children who were bitten back with him? At least, I think that that's who Remus' "much younger brothers and sisters" are. They'll no doubt have a wonderful life with Remus as their Daddy. It's a very sweet end of the story. |
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| Reviewer: lady_of_the_Moon | Date: 2007-01-05 |
| Reviewid: 146763 | Chapter: 1 |
You're quite lucky that I like Remus so much. I wouldn't bother to read it if it wasn't for Remus. The formatting is really bad (=none).
The story itself was really interesing though. I like it actually. Especially that part in the end about having younger brothers and sisters... |
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| Reviewer: Arianna of Bellezza | Date: 2007-01-03 |
| Reviewid: 146733 | Chapter: 1 |
| The summary of your story makes it seem interesting, but I haven't read it yet because there are no paragraphs. I don't know if it's a formatting error, but not many people want to read something with no paragraphs. |
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| Reviewer: Alkari | Date: 2007-01-03 |
| Reviewid: 146725 | Chapter: 1 |
| SnorkakCatcher, this is almost impossible to read because there is no formatting - it's just one huge long paragraph, including all the dialogue. Can you possibly re-submit it in a better format? |
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