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| Reviewer: piggypig144 | Date: 2007-08-16 |
| Reviewid: 148868 | Chapter: 1 |
on 'A shady spot for Stream of Thought: Ginny' in about the 15th sentence, (near the bottom on the right hand side) is 'with' supposed to be 'wish' ??
Good, i liked how you can do alot of different point of veiws. |
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| Reviewer: Verin | Date: 2007-05-31 |
| Reviewid: 148144 | Chapter: 1 |
Although it was all terrific, I'm fondest of Hagrid cucumber, growing up to the size of respectable canoe. You are gifted. |
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| Reviewer: philotic_net | Date: 2007-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 147015 | Chapter: 1 |
| I liked this so much. What beautiful description and dialog. It made me think of the end of television programs or movies where it changes quickly from scene to scene to give you a look at what has happened to all the characters. Full of emotion. Wonderful job. |
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| Reviewer: citysnidget | Date: 2007-01-09 |
| Reviewid: 146817 | Chapter: 1 |
| this is really lovely. something rings true about it about how we feel when we've lost someone. great work! |
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