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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Sara | Date: 2007-05-31 |
| Reviewid: 148147 | Chapter: 1 |
Bit confusing since you've obviously forgotten to put the pieces into the correct order ;-)
But great in hindsight. |
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| Reviewer: Starsea | Date: 2007-01-23 |
| Reviewid: 146973 | Chapter: 1 |
This is an intriguing story about what really happened to Emmeline Vance and Snape's role in her death. As usual, your attention to detail really makes the story: from reversing the process so that we're led back to the beginning of this whole sorry tale. I particularly liked Carrows calling her "little Emma", it was chilling, reminded me of Bellatrix's baby voice.
I don't believe that this is what really happened but I certainly appreciate the idea.
xxx~Starsea~xxx |
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| Reviewer: iseult | Date: 2007-01-23 |
| Reviewid: 146968 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was really good. The unusual construction worked very well. It was great to read an original take on the Emmeline Vance question. |
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| Reviewer: springdove | Date: 2007-01-19 |
| Reviewid: 146921 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow! This is a great story! I am mightily impressed by its construction. Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Poppy p | Date: 2007-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 146827 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very well written and interesting format. A unique take on Snape and an excellent missing moment type piece. Must take time to read more of your work! :) |
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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2007-01-09 |
| Reviewid: 146803 | Chapter: 1 |
What a great story! I couldn't figure out what was happening; you had me completely fooled. Looking back, I understand more of what was meant between Dumbledore and Snape. I liked how you portrayed Snape: as a ruthless death eater, a healer in his own way, even as a man with a heart.
The order which you wrote your story in was unique and really kept my attention. Again, a great story! |
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