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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Have This Wish
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Violet AzureDate: 2007-08-21
Reviewid: 148973Chapter: 1
[She could hex Charlie for introducing her to this silly superstition anyway. He had told her the poem once when he was child-minding—how old had she been? Eight? Wishing on a star…stars were not even magical…]

That's cute--I like seeing the contrast between the wizarding world and the Muggle world.

[But he was laughing… at something Hermione had said…while ruffling her hair. Hermione was tucked under his arm, her curls exploding out from under the knitted edge of her stocking cap. Her face glowing as she looked up at him. Ginny smirked; limp or no limp, Ron was fine.]

*snert* Ginny certainly knows Ron!
This is a really beautiful moment. The melting snowflakes, the quiet reflection, the silence and stillness of the scene. It's like a beautiful meditation. Hope to see more H/G fics from you!

Reviewer: hp4-sauceDate: 2007-02-28
Reviewid: 147324Chapter: 1
Nice touch echoing the line in HBP immediately before "the kiss". Very nice one-shot.

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2007-02-27
Reviewid: 147313Chapter: 1
Very Nice.

Reviewer: ChocaholicDate: 2007-02-26
Reviewid: 147297Chapter: 1
Ah, this story was magical! Thanks for writing!

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