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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Romance Enhancement
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: A_Wash1979Date: 2007-04-15
Reviewid: 147767Chapter: 1
Heeey! Arthur and Molly gettin' their swerve on; nothing wrong with that! As soon as I read the words "Chocolate Truffles" I knew two things were going to happen. I knew that hilarity would ensue and that Fred and George would be behind it. The best thing about your writing is that you know the characters so well. The dialogue that flows out of their mouths seems effortless on your part.

On a side note, don't Fred and George come off like a couple of drug dealers sometimes? "Psst. Hey, man. We got somethin' over here that'll get you faded fast, man. Check it out." Or maybe that's just me...

Reviewer: NaazjuDate: 2007-03-12
Reviewid: 147436Chapter: 1
Leave it to Fred and George to have "too much fun" at every wedding that year! This story made me laugh as soon as I realized it all had to do with Weasley's Wizard Wheezes. Plus, I'm glad you hope for Arthur and Molly to survive the war. They deserve it, after all they've been through. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: shimotsukiDate: 2007-03-10
Reviewid: 147421Chapter: 1
Aww, this was sweet. I like the idea of a love potion that only works on people who are already in love ... much less unethical that way! Poor Molly; these truffles were just what she needed, if she was too stressed out to enjoy anything at all. But my favorite part is the fact that Arthur was thinking wistfully about Molly *before* he ate his first truffle.

Reviewer: AmandaBDate: 2007-03-09
Reviewid: 147419Chapter: 1
Now that's something you never want to see. But I really did like it. You'd think that Molly and Arthur would know not to eat anything that Fred and George hadn't eaten first by now... :) Very cute, funny, and sweet. Keep writing.

Reviewer: ms.lupinDate: 2007-03-09
Reviewid: 147415Chapter: 1
Wonderful. I really like seeing that people whom have been married a while still have to work on the married. God love the twins for their little pranks.

Reviewer: Wolf's ScreamDate: 2007-03-09
Reviewid: 147414Chapter: 1
Heh -- cute. Nice timing for Gred & Forge (this time), though, eh? :-)

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