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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Little White Ones
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: PrettyPixieDate: 2007-07-19
Reviewid: 148612Chapter: 1
Amazing. I love it!

Reviewer: NunduDate: 2007-04-11
Reviewid: 147741Chapter: 1
This was fabulous! You really got in Ron's head with this. Well done.

Reviewer: Author by NightDate: 2007-04-04
Reviewid: 147668Chapter: 1
I really like this insight into Ron during HBP - it's nice to see his side, so to speak. And how in the end, he was bold enough to be honest.

Reviewer: Lady WhizbeeDate: 2007-03-28
Reviewid: 147622Chapter: 1
Well done.

I love seeing the change that happens from beginning to end, and the brevity of it is quite nice as well. The lack of dialogue tags really speeds it up, leading us to the dramatic head-on crash in the end.

Quite nice. In total, very refreshing and well thought. :-)

Reviewer: Madame V. HunterDate: 2007-03-27
Reviewid: 147607Chapter: 1
Well done. It was sad, and caught what I think Jo tried to convey Ron felt at the same time. Perfect blend of irritation and shame.

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