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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 3

Reviewer: AirriDate: 2007-04-09
Reviewid: 147715Chapter: 1
Hehehee. I like the transition from robe wearing Tonks/tee shirt wearing Tonks to purple Tonks/pink Tonks--you did a good job of making it so that the readers would be able to tell them apart.

And I want to hear Remus's story...

Reviewer: shimotsukiDate: 2007-04-09
Reviewid: 147711Chapter: 1
I'm glad to see you've posted this story here! This is a lot of fun to read -- fast-paced and very funny. You've got some great ideas for handling the technical difficulties of a time-travel story, like distinguishing Tonks from Tonks by their outfits and hair colors. Bill was a great addition to the cast, with all of his sly digs and comments. And, Remus has a time-travel story! (Does this mean there will be a sequel?) Some of my very favorite gags were the Slytherin-themed boxers (!) and the anvil remark... And the final lines are very sweet.

Reviewer: ms.lupinDate: 2007-04-05
Reviewid: 147686Chapter: 1
I am so glad you made Remus stop taking about the time loop thing. He was starting to give me a headache. I know I went cross eyed to a second there. Very funny, it brighten my cold snowy day. I just love fluffy Remus and Tonks' stories.

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