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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: For Those Who Yearn
Review(s): 1

Reviewer: philotic_netDate: 2007-05-09
Reviewid: 147969Chapter: 1
Very sweet. Their interaction seems wonderfully realistic.
My favorite part was:

[He wants to tell her everything that’s pouring out, that when he sniffed Amortentia she was hidden inside the fumes, that he thinks of her always, that he wishes he could spend every lunch hour by the lake as they used too.

“My mum had red hair,” he whispers into her ear.]


It was such a simple detail for Harry to share with her but it was in a way, very personal.
Again, Great job!
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