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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Burning Day
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: stubefiedDate: 2007-06-22
Reviewid: 148314Chapter: 1
This was wonderful! It was touching and had great characterisation. I loved the little details that fit in. I think my favorite part was Albus's naming of Fawkes, and his train of thought leading up to it. That or when Fawkes says he was a great wizard.

Reviewer: Poppy PDate: 2007-05-30
Reviewid: 148134Chapter: 1
That was amazing! Powerful and evocative. I never would've thought about a Phoenix having all of those emotions. Of course there was a powerful bond between them and it had to have started somewhere. This was beautiful. I'll never think of Fawkes in the same way again.

Reviewer: peachpickerDate: 2007-05-27
Reviewid: 148102Chapter: 1
It is my usual practice to go first to the author's page before going to the story itself. What a welcome thing it was to find that the author of the Eshu's Daughter stories had posted another story. What a wonderful story this is, and it is so suitable for a Memorial Day weekend here in the USA.


Thank you, and may your words continue to sing as beautifully in whatever you may write.

Reviewer: Ardie BeaDate: 2007-05-27
Reviewid: 148099Chapter: 1
Well, I'm glad you dipped back in, even if only briefly. That was very beautiful. Thank you.

Reviewer: KateHC2Date: 2007-05-27
Reviewid: 148097Chapter: 1
This is absolutely beautiful. You've done a fantastic job capturing the proud wild phoenix who grows to love his friend and companion.

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