|
| Dumbledore's
Army |
|
|
|
Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: Jim McGuffin | Date: 2007-06-26 |
| Reviewid: 148380 | Chapter: 1 |
| Now that Book Seven is almost here, I was in the mood to check out some fanfics and I decided to start out with yours. This was a nice little fic. I like how Bill and Fleur meet each other when they are young. I wonder which brother knocked Fleur down -- for some reason I bet it was Percy. Yes, who would know that someday she herself would be striving to "improve her English," eh? Overall, good job and I'm sure that both of us are looking forward to the Bill/Fleur wedding in canon. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
| Reviewer: Ara Kane | Date: 2007-06-25 |
| Reviewid: 148358 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is so sweet :) I think you captured the awkwardness of the language barrier very well. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
| Reviewer: jncarlin | Date: 2007-06-09 |
| Reviewid: 148236 | Chapter: 1 |
This was cute. I liked how set in her opinions and independent Fleur is even as a little girl. And Bill's teenage awkwardness is very endearing.
I have a deep fondness for Fleur, and there just aren't enough stories about her. Thanks for sharing this. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
| Reviewer: Author by Night | Date: 2007-06-08 |
| Reviewid: 148225 | Chapter: 1 |
| Sweet. :) I like your young!Fleur. And her once having met Bill also lends a new meaning to that scene in GoF. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
| Reviewer: ksellers | Date: 2007-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 148215 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a great snippet, Arya... I like little Fleur. I don't have much love for Fleur, but here... she's nice, and not quite so full of herself... yet. But I can see she will be. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
| Reviewer: Pumpkin Juice | Date: 2007-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 148210 | Chapter: 1 |
I saw this on here and read it again! I did a little happy dance upon seeing it posted because that's just so cool. I got a preview.
Anyway, this seems really random, and I do have a point, which is that I love this idea and that it was conceptualized very well. |
| Report possible abuse to a moderator |
|
|
