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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2007-07-10
Reviewid: 148510Chapter: 1
Aww, sweet fluff!

Reviewer: MeganDate: 2007-07-10
Reviewid: 148506Chapter: 1
This is a lovely piece in which Ron's voice is spot on, as it always is in your stories. The only part I didn't like were the last 2 phrases, which are superfluous and un-Ron-like. He wouldn't think that way, and he doesn't need to. Actions speak louder, and your story shows that quite clearly. So have a bit more trust in your readers and don't hand them the moral of the story on a platter, but let them draw it themselves. Other than this, I loved every line.

Reviewer: BirgitDate: 2007-07-10
Reviewid: 148502Chapter: 1
Lovely story. The summary convinced me right away to read it, as it was so in character for the Trio. I was not disappointed by the characterisation in the story itself: it's spot-on. I love Ron not knowing the day of the week, Harry feeling guilty about keeping his friend from going back to school, and the two of them putting this plan into action, even though it means that they have to do homework themselves as well.

And yes, I'm sure Hermione would have turned down the entire offer if she really had to be at Hogwarts at the same time every month. She would have been devastated, but she's got her priorities straight.

This story makes me want to hug the Trio, and it makes me want to read book 7 even more! Thanks for this wonderful read.

Reviewer: Wolf's ScreamDate: 2007-07-10
Reviewid: 148498Chapter: 1
Heh -- cute & well-written. Sneakiness would appear to be an element of strategizing, eh? :-)

Reviewer: ChocaholicDate: 2007-07-10
Reviewid: 148497Chapter: 1
Very appropriate - Ron in a nutshell. Well done!

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