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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: The Squib
Review(s): 3

Reviewer: Silver PhoenixDate: 2007-09-25
Reviewid: 149412Chapter: 1
I'm glad someone is looking into the life of a Squib. I like the characters so far, but my only criticism would be that it moves a bit fast. Still trying to keep everyone straight. More breaks from dialogue with descriptions might help.

"Lookalike Lozenges" - loved it. I'm always trying to think up creative Weasley products, and I thought this one was brilliant, although it's kind of funny that Fred and George would be testing it on themselves, as they already look alike.

Anyway, good work...I'll continue reading!

Reviewer: walkerhoundDate: 2007-08-23
Reviewid: 148989Chapter: 2
just wanted to say how glad i am that your continuing this.

also good job on harry&ginny's reaction to there daughter and jack. vary realistic.

Reviewer: FictionGoddessDate: 2007-07-18
Reviewid: 148596Chapter: 1
Okay, I'm hooked. This is going to be a great story - I even recognised the Magic Moment Challenge in there with Bert's Christmas surprise. Ben seems lovely and you've made Padma a brilliant 'fussy mum' type without changing who she is. :)
You've set it up really well and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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