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Review(s): 20
| Reviewer: EvilFairy | Date: 2009-07-15 |
| Reviewid: 151433 | Chapter: 15 |
I have enjoyed your story and am hoping to see another chapter soon. Please let me know when you will be sending it out.
EvilFairy
Nxtphaze@yahoo.com |
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| Reviewer: Gred_and_Feorge | Date: 2009-01-23 |
| Reviewid: 151358 | Chapter: 1 |
| I cant figure out when this book is based/set. Is it like the 7th book if Dumbledore was alive? |
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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2008-06-07 |
| Reviewid: 150895 | Chapter: 11 |
| This chapter had well written, tender scenes in it. And then you left us hanging! Post again soon! |
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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2008-05-17 |
| Reviewid: 150858 | Chapter: 4 |
| I'm glad to be back and catching up with your story. I enjoy it so much! I can't wait to read the remaining chapters. Keep the story going! |
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| Reviewer: Riadhri | Date: 2008-03-31 |
| Reviewid: 150700 | Chapter: 3 |
Okay, quick question. Why are certain words coloured and scored? It's only slightly irritating, but I understand if they are meant to be emphasized.
~Riadhri |
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| Reviewer: Whisperwords | Date: 2008-03-24 |
| Reviewid: 150651 | Chapter: 5 |
I found it quite hard to comment on this paticular chapter.
I have have loved all your work so far but everything goes a little too quickly here. Perhaps a little more discriptive work. I still love it though! Don't atke the wrong impressoin, your work is great! I love it! Just keep it up now. |
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| Reviewer: Whisperwords | Date: 2008-03-24 |
| Reviewid: 150650 | Chapter: 4 |
| This brought a tear to my eye. I'm glad you put in a bit about Fabian and Gideon. They're not mentioned enough in the actual books. |
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| Reviewer: Whisperwords | Date: 2008-03-24 |
| Reviewid: 150649 | Chapter: 3 |
| Loved it. Especially the ending, "...Harry closed his eyes and shut out the world." Fab! |
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| Reviewer: Whisperwords | Date: 2008-03-24 |
| Reviewid: 150648 | Chapter: 2 |
| Brilliant! You put so much thught into your writing, I can really tell. Keep it up! |
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| Reviewer: ginny44 | Date: 2008-01-27 |
| Reviewid: 150470 | Chapter: 6 |
| Omg i love these storys keep on writing this chapter was great and i can't wait for the next onee♥ |
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| Reviewer: music4life | Date: 2008-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 150380 | Chapter: 1 |
| I think you are a very good writer. I'm glad you made DUdley appreciate Harry because it didn't really say it good in the Deathly Hallows. |
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| Reviewer: birdsong | Date: 2008-01-08 |
| Reviewid: 150357 | Chapter: 1 |
| I've enjoyed your story; I think you've captured Dudley's character and how he could try to relate to Harry. I've got to read on!!! |
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| Reviewer: ginny44 | Date: 2007-11-24 |
| Reviewid: 149990 | Chapter: 5 |
| Omg you are such an amzing author i love your stories and i have been keeping track of this one for somewhile now..i hope you continue it and congrats on the achivements with this story :) |
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| Reviewer: Chocaholic | Date: 2007-08-08 |
| Reviewid: 148776 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great start! And I don't think Dudley's any more out of character here than he was in DH. That REALLY threw me for a loop (the first of many, I might add...). Looking forward to more. |
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