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Review(s): 5
| Reviewer: Lesley | Date: 2007-12-04 |
| Reviewid: 150079 | Chapter: 1 |
| Is this only one chapter? I think its a very good start to a longer tale. I was also wondering about the returning students juggling school and work. Perhaps all will be cleared up soon? Good work. |
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| Reviewer: The13thDoctor | Date: 2007-12-03 |
| Reviewid: 150072 | Chapter: 1 |
| Er, why would people be back at Hogwarts if they already were in the Ministry? Isn't the point of school to be able to get into the MInistry and other jobs? If one has already accomplished that, then why continue with school? |
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| Reviewer: scottykarrde | Date: 2007-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 150069 | Chapter: 1 |
*blown away*
Wow. Really, really, really clever. I was *wondering* re...Luna and Dean. so I wasn't the only one to pick up on that, then?
My favorite, absolutely favorite, lines were the "rest in peace" stream of consciousness of Neville's, and "this was before the days of the fountain ("in loving memory....")
Brilliant, brilliant, BRILLIANT writing. Really tight.
Looking forward to more of your work. |
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