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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: A Spring Lament
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: lisabelle_moonstone.goyDate: 2009-10-02
Reviewid: 151515Chapter: 1
nice.. i like it

Reviewer: Gred and FeorgeDate: 2008-01-01
Reviewid: 150285Chapter: 1
Man- That is SOOO GOOD!!!! I can't even describe how god it is!!!


Dearest Lily,...With all the love I possess, Severus

Thats Soo sweet- it's actually bringing tears to my eyes


Perhaps that is what is keeping me awake tonight—your little troublemaker is up to something, and my vow of protection will not let me rest until I know he is safe.

Aww thats really sweet- he really loved Lily.


I will not have to deal with these hormonal time bombs on legs we refer to as children, nor will I have to be concerned with the affairs of your calamity-prone son. I will be able to sit in peace and remember summers past—summers when you reserved your affections for me alone.


Thats funny! I never though that Snape had a sence of humor but I think that first bits a good laugh! The second bits a bit sad though...

Rock On!!!
~Jack(ie)

Reviewer: Violet AzureDate: 2007-12-31
Reviewid: 150282Chapter: 1
I *love* your Severus/Lily fics. His letter to Lily was so sad and so romantic, and yet he still manages a few nasty digs at Harry and James. The quote at the beginning of the story really sets the tone and captures Snape's mindset. Excellent! More Lily/Severus please!

Reviewer: neanaDate: 2007-12-10
Reviewid: 150122Chapter: 1
Just beautiful. Thank you for this. You portrayed his conflict of feelings towards Harry lovely.

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