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| Reviewer: Poppy P | Date: 2008-08-28 |
| Reviewid: 151061 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was beautiful. Very touching. I liked how you mentioned that every time Sev had a negative feeling, it made him feel ashamed; like that wasn't the place to have those kind of feelings. I think your Lily was perfect as well. The end actually made me teary eyed. I loved how you kind of insinuated that they fell to the earth together and it seems like they may connect, then we see that they're both children. Again, beautiful. |
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| Reviewer: Magicdust | Date: 2008-08-26 |
| Reviewid: 151056 | Chapter: 1 |
I got goosebumps reading this
._. Which is rare for me....
I LOVED THIS OMG WHY ISN'T THERE MORE
*helplessly looks for more*
-MD |
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| Reviewer: B. Nonymous | Date: 2008-08-23 |
| Reviewid: 151028 | Chapter: 1 |
| Glad I dropped by again. Nice new piece that gives poor Severus some (final) peace. Pardon the poor use of homonyms. |
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