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Reviews for: Fruition
Review(s): 3

Reviewer: frankie beeblebroxDate: 2008-09-23
Reviewid: 151121Chapter: 1
Simple. elegant. Beautiful. I love the reality of this situation and the sensitivity you've given to both characters. . . but I always love your Neville/Hannah.

Reviewer: Grace has VictoryDate: 2008-09-03
Reviewid: 151075Chapter: 1
This was very touching. I was crying with Hannah and wondering at Neville's resignation. I've always liked to think that they produced a tribe of sons to reinvigorate the fading line of Longbottom; it's so sad to consider the possibility that it didn't happen easily, or at all. But you left us guessing whether or not this baby will live... Any hope of a sequel?

Reviewer: toskinDate: 2008-09-01
Reviewid: 151069Chapter: 1
Beautiful story. I battled infertility, had difficult pregnancies (3) and won, but have a good understanding of what Hannah is going through. It hurt terribly to be around my friends when they got pregnant, had uneventful pregnancies, and did whatever they wanted. I frequently felt like my husband didn't understand and wasn't as affect by the difficulties. You did an excellent job of conveying the mood and the how it has affected Neville and Hannah's relationship. The story brought tears to my eyes. Are you going to continue it?

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