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Review(s): 10
| Reviewer: xxDawn | Date: 2004-11-08 |
| Reviewid: 103882 | Chapter: 1 |
| Great emotion, but the plot needs to evolve a bit. What decision is he making? Who died? Good writing though. |
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| Reviewer: JellyDingyStar | Date: 2004-02-25 |
| Reviewid: 72197 | Chapter: 1 |
| I do not get what choice he's makin'! You could make it have more detail and more chapters. And who is the love of his life? Cho? Ginny? *shudder* Hermione? Great emotion though |
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| Reviewer: dunno | Date: 2003-07-08 |
| Reviewid: 40749 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a sad story... it made me very sad inside... :( Good writing though... you can really pull the emotion out of people... |
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