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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Shaded
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: LizDate: 2004-08-14
Reviewid: 97183Chapter: 1
ummmm, this quote doesn't seem right to me: "Shadows are dispensable and recyclable - just turn on a light and they disappear." I seemed to think that when you turn off a light the shadow disapears. when you turn on a light the shadow is there. just a thought...

Reviewer: MaskDate: 2003-12-10
Reviewid: 62799Chapter: 1
Its very IC and I like it that you haven't felt the need to attribute to Ron anything extra as I sometimes see authors doing.
Nice.. Mask

Reviewer: Ara KaneDate: 2003-07-28
Reviewid: 44288Chapter: 1
This was very nice. I like Ron's deep thoughts about shadows -- you explored quite a few ways through which he can relate to them.

Reviewer: noonefromnowhereDate: 2003-01-27
Reviewid: 18044Chapter: 1
A nice little peek into the mind of Ron.
I think you did a pretty good
job in showing his feelings
of inadequacy yet showing the
determintaion he's demonstrated
in the past. He knows he belongs
he's just not where yet.
Most of us have felt that way at least once.

Looking forward to more from you.

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