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Reviews for: Four Sins: Prelude
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: EmilyDate: 2005-09-30
Reviewid: 133474Chapter: 1
A few grammatical errors which should be fixed, but otherwise it was extremely well done. Very tear provoking!

Reviewer: MargaretDate: 2003-09-11
Reviewid: 51839Chapter: 1
This is great! I wrote a story like this, and I must say that I think that yours is probably better. Greatjob! I've always loved to think about James and stuff finding out about Lupin.
Write more.

Reviewer: Someone ReadingDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 42984Chapter: 1
I just found your story, and all I can say is that it's beautiful. Wonderfully written, and the characterization is, in my opinion, perfect. Thank you for writing it. One more thing. I do not for one moment believe that Sirius and James were bully's. I do not, not, not! Before Book 5, I was starting to like Snape a little, now I hate him with the deepest loathing possible. It is his fault that Sirius is missing. (I do not believe he is dead, it would be too cruel to Harry and to us.) Once again thanks for the wonderful story.

Reviewer: bored2deathDate: 2003-03-02
Reviewid: 22485Chapter: 1
Ah yes, the series is over and I have to say is that I have enjoyed reading it! Well done!

Reviewer: siraDate: 2003-01-05
Reviewid: 15294Chapter: 1

Reviewer: JobeyDate: 2002-10-07
Reviewid: 5634Chapter: 1
Dear Inyron,

Congrats! 'Four Sins' has been nominated for a Bloody Brilliant! Award, 'Best Series'. *tosses chocolate frog*

You've been contacted for two reasons:one, to give you the option of declining the nomination, particularly if you visit our webpage ( and don't wish to be associated. If you do indeed accept your stories will be linked, and, if you do win an award, we will take your acception as permission to post them in our archives. Also if you wish to send a revised and/or beta'd version before the 10th of October of the fic.

There are no further responsibilities involved with accepting, but there is an Award Banquet in a private chatroom on a weekend of November (the 23 and 24). We'd like to have everyone involved and all nominated writers present; we'll beee annoucing the results of the awards and probably just revelling in a bit of cyber HP universe... which is always *cough cough* a perfectly legitimate way to spend an hour, isn't it? We'd be delighted to have you along.

Congratulations again. We wish you the best of luck in all your writing -- long live HP!


Chief Mugwump
The Bloody Brilliant! Awards Staff

'It is our choices who make us who we are... far more than our abilities' -- Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets

Reviewer: caitlinDate: 2002-08-13
Reviewid: 1802Chapter: 1

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