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Review(s): 7
| Reviewer: CornedBee | Date: 2004-05-02 |
| Reviewid: 81085 | Chapter: 1 |
The pages formatting is for some reason completely messed up in Mozilla.
Anyway, very funny story, good plot. The grammar is kind of sloppy though, especially in the first second. James is less adventurous than I ever imagined him too. |
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| Reviewer: bored2death | Date: 2003-03-02 |
| Reviewid: 22461 | Chapter: 1 |
| He he, awesome story! I love it! Its very well written and very entertaining. Now I'm going to check if you have any other fics... |
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