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Review(s): 16
| Reviewer: Hermy Weasley | Date: 2008-06-08 |
| Reviewid: 150900 | Chapter: 1 |
| I LOVE it OMG it was the best ever Harry and Ginny, Hermione and Ron ;) Godda lovem there is a reason im ron's cousin, cousin Hermione,and cousin Harry nice ring to it please write more. |
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| Reviewer: HPMusical: My Calling | Date: 2008-05-07 |
| Reviewid: 150834 | Chapter: 1 |
| This story is so CUTE! It definietly shows the characters, too. I really liked the dialouge. Good writing! |
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| Reviewer: her | Date: 2005-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 130588 | Chapter: 1 |
| yes very funny but I don't expected to see that in harry potter, anyway good one with "my girl"=>lot of laugh! |
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| Reviewer: Alicia | Date: 2005-06-12 |
| Reviewid: 123857 | Chapter: 1 |
| The bit about diversionary tactics is taken from '10 things i hate about you' isn't it? the scene where bianca's older sister flashes the teacher to get the fit guy out of detention? |
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| Reviewer: GoodGirl | Date: 2004-11-13 |
| Reviewid: 104686 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like the way you write. But I think that your writing skills would be a lot better if you change the ship. R/Hr and H/G are not suitable for stories like these. |
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| Reviewer: GinnyPotter | Date: 2004-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 98015 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was without a doubt the best fan fic i've yet read! I was laughing my butt off when Ginny could see evertones underwear! Especially Draco's...that sound just like some thing he would do and it completely captured his character. I have no complaints. I thought that it was a brilliant idea for a fan fic. The plan was awsome! I also loved Ron being the protective oldeer brother-we saw only a little of that in OotP. I also loved...well i better quit cuz i loved everything. It could go on forever if i listed all of it. Brilliant ending too!! The whole thing was nothing short of brilliant! |
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| Reviewer: Maura | Date: 2004-06-10 |
| Reviewid: 86631 | Chapter: 1 |
| My sister walked into my room looking at me as though I was crazy because I was laughing insanely and very loudly while reading this. What a plan and what gifts the boys had! LOL! |
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| Reviewer: Me | Date: 2004-01-31 |
| Reviewid: 69010 | Chapter: 1 |
LoL! This is great! The ending...
POTTER! came a shout up the stairwell. Harry blanched. You better not be doing anything with my sister up there! I saw you take that hearthrug, and I know what you re-- Ron s tirade was cut off by a softer, more feminine voice.
Ron, Hermione s voice wheedled, How about we go find our own hearthrug? There was a silence, and then Harry and Ginny could hear Ron s voice answer back, breaking slightly.
Yes, dear, he said. Then they heard nothing but noises that sounded like someone being kissed senseless.
lol, just great! Write more soon!! |
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| Reviewer: WEll | Date: 2004-01-24 |
| Reviewid: 68312 | Chapter: 1 |
| Somehow ther eare all these little boxes where there should be letters and I cannot stand to read between the lines. Sorry bout that! |
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| Reviewer: Roy C | Date: 2003-07-31 |
| Reviewid: 44781 | Chapter: 1 |
| roflmsao...that was funny ...I was almost in tears with the owls..doing a motown tune. |
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