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Review(s): 21
| Reviewer: Geena Waters | Date: 2005-08-14 |
| Reviewid: 129964 | Chapter: 10 |
Oooo...harshnesssssss!!! But Malfoy totally desearves it, ha! This is a neat story. I like the pairings, the pairings are good :D;). At least now that the 6th book has come out people won't go around trying to pair Harry and Hermione up (unless it's an AU fic). I would like to read more. This has been entertaining.
~GW |
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| Reviewer: Nikki | Date: 2005-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 125826 | Chapter: 10 |
Well written, I only caught a handful of typos, which I do constantly anyway, so I can't really say anything. LOL.
I like how you wrote Ron/Hermione, there's none of that *oh we love each other so lets start planning the nursery*, which I hate hate hate.
The summary was misleading, or did I miss the "mortal peril?" Or, maybe you aren't done yet? *crosses fingers*
All in all, very good style. |
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| Reviewer: Nikki | Date: 2005-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 125822 | Chapter: 5 |
"On those occasions they were careful to keep a close watch on Malfoy and on his bodyguards, which wasn't too difficult since the latter apparently shared a brain."
LOL. Good chapter. *Ron punched Malfoy, Ron punched Malfoy!* |
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| Reviewer: celestina black | Date: 2003-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 48213 | Chapter: 10 |
aww, very very nicely marvy!
r/h and h/g, what more could i ask for?
mucho funno
and.... once again..
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DANCE CLASSES!!! |
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| Reviewer: cb | Date: 2003-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 48210 | Chapter: 6 |
ooh, someone who DIDNT give ron blue robes!
come to think of it, chocolate brown WOULD look nice on him!!
well done there |
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| Reviewer: cb | Date: 2003-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 48207 | Chapter: 5 |
ah harry.
"well. who wants breakfast?"
sounds like me. in all randomness, ill end up on food... |
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| Reviewer: cel black | Date: 2003-08-22 |
| Reviewid: 48205 | Chapter: 2 |
BWAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAAH DANCE LESSONS CLASSS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
oh god, dya actually think the teachers would torture students liek that?
it shudnt matter to ron, he learned how to dance from his mum. as did all the weasley boys
but, hey, i still lose- for a gym class one term- i had to take SQUAREDANCEING. and our 'final project' was in COSTUME.
oy a lot |
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| Reviewer: Merusa | Date: 2003-01-05 |
| Reviewid: 15255 | Chapter: 10 |
That was quite a good story! I hope you write more. H/G was so cute in it! Although, I would have enjoyed H/G under the mistletoe, especially with Malfoy's comments. He is funny, after all, and he got exactly what he deserved!
absolutely corking job! |
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| Reviewer: Freddy | Date: 2003-01-03 |
| Reviewid: 14944 | Chapter: 10 |
| ok. that was a good story! very fluffy sweet and entertaining! i hope that you will have another one soon !!!! |
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