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Review(s): 17
| Reviewer: hollow_now_gone | Date: 2008-03-24 |
| Reviewid: 150652 | Chapter: 1 |
| HA! That was great! Wonderful way of looking at our world thru their eyes! |
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| Reviewer: bingbang | Date: 2005-03-19 |
| Reviewid: 116995 | Chapter: 1 |
| that is sooo crazy....but i def like the idea of the story within reality within a story |
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| Reviewer: Mary Ellis | Date: 2005-02-07 |
| Reviewid: 113191 | Chapter: 1 |
| Why wonky? It's a very satisfying short. You establish the characters (the on-going H/R tiffs are always fun, also the dig about Ron's use of the telephone),create the situation deftly with the invention of Orb, play around with time and space a bit in a sci-fi sort of way, and give us an ending that makes us think--the characters are watching a Muggle reading a book about them. It's a brain-tickler, a little like the time-warp of P. of Azkaban or The Never-Ending Story. |
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| Reviewer: CornedBee | Date: 2004-03-08 |
| Reviewid: 73682 | Chapter: 1 |
| Cool piece of Parody. Reminds me of the story where fanfic stories invade Hogwarts. |
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| Reviewer: j | Date: 2004-03-02 |
| Reviewid: 72906 | Chapter: 1 |
| people, read it, it sayd harry and co. as in company not cho!! jeez.. where ddi we learn to read?? |
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| Reviewer: hydraspit | Date: 2003-11-12 |
| Reviewid: 59862 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ha!!! this story is so funny to read when I'm sitting in a boring office... with florescent lights... pretending to do work.... and reading fanfiction instead of actually working! |
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| Reviewer: Ashley | Date: 2003-08-18 |
| Reviewid: 47637 | Chapter: 1 |
Well, gee, if you were reading for Cho, I guess you would be disappointed. *rolls eyes*
I thought it was brilliant (cubicles are evil). I don't know why you talk so badly about it - I think you did a great job! Okay, even if it is a little... office-space-induced. :) |
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| Reviewer: tom felton | Date: 2003-01-18 |
| Reviewid: 16708 | Chapter: 1 |
| ummmmm, well it had nothing 2 do wit cho chang like u said, i ddint get it at all, no offence but it wasnt really that good |
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