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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Ham and Cheese
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: hydraspitDate: 2004-02-17
Reviewid: 71190Chapter: 1
ah... so cute.... too bad they had to adopt him. They should've just let Wormtail die.

Reviewer: MelissaDate: 2003-08-04
Reviewid: 45283Chapter: 1
I really thought your story was cute, but I've kind of got to wonder what sort of five or six year old would talk the way Percy is talking. I almost thought you forgot how old he was until you made his climb to the candy a bit difficult.

Other than that, it was really great.

Reviewer: KaraDate: 2003-07-22
Reviewid: 43310Chapter: 1
I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats! I hate rats!

Reviewer: Chloe Lily LupinDate: 2003-01-11
Reviewid: 15876Chapter: 1
Evil Scabbers/Wormtail! must die!

Reviewer: ChambraigneDate: 2002-11-20
Reviewid: 9604Chapter: 1
Very nice well-rounded portrait of Percy, and Ron as a toddler is cute.

Reviewer: CatherineDate: 2002-11-12
Reviewid: 8787Chapter: 1
This is a great set up. I really hope you continue to explore Peter in your fictions!

Catherine

Reviewer: wahleeDate: 2002-08-16
Reviewid: 2196Chapter: 1
An interesting theory as to how Scabbers came to live with the Weasleys. I'd make one suggestion-- when you write dialogue, it's best to put each speaker on a separate line. It's much easier to follow that way.

I love Ron's baby talk. :)

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